Honestly, my review will be similar to that in "Apocalypse Eve". It doesn't sound complex, but makes good industrial and ambient feeling.
In my opinion "Apocalypse Eve" sound better than this one but I think it works well as a soundtrack for games or videos, That's why I give 7/10.

~Bolt

The intro tends to be a bit too heavy for my taste, but I can imagine this music in a factory level in a Crash Bandicoot game -- this is what it gives me an impression of. I love those glitchy noises that appear halfway, and those swooshing sounds -- it reminds me of machines and people behaving like automatons. There are points of calm, and points where everything comes back in, so it keeps the song interesting.

1:50 onwards has a... rather stereotypical melody. Also, the chords seem to be repetitive.

I like what you have going at 2:49 onwards, with everything sounding tinny before blasting into action at 3:02. 3:02 onwards, however, feels awkwardly mixed. Everything is blasting through the speakers, it seems that a few instruments are competing with each other for pride of place.

I don't know if I could call this a hit, but I certainly had a fun time listening to this.

4/5.

- RRC -

The progression was confusing, but I enjoyed the mixing. Good work!