Nice job man! This track has some serious potential. I feel like it could use some stronger sidechain/ducking, but I get that this is supposed to be minimal and less strong feeling, so I won't include that part in the actual rating. Everything seems fine to me, although I don't know exactly how this style is supposed to work because it's not really my kind of genre, but really the only noticeable thing I could find that could be fixed is that the crash is far too loud and blurs out everything with the amount of synthetic white noise. Otherwise, fantastic progressive minimal house you have here :)
Also, great choice of VST, I use serum for literally everything in my songs, it's an absolute boss, despite being quite cpu heavy :P

This actually... isn't bad! Not bad at all! Although it does get uninteresting at points, for what it is, it's nice! If you make NGADM, though, you're gonna have to scrap the reptition...

Best of luck making NGADM!

- RRC -

A lot of people are probably going to complain that it's repetitive and stuff, but if you're looking at as background music for a video game or something, repetition is exactly what you want.

The synths are put together nicely, but sometimes certain parts get drowned out by others.

I like the feel of the song. It's very crystalline. The name is befitting, I think. The trotting bass line is cool, makes the tone a little hurried, which makes me think that there's a time limit to the whole scene (in a good way). It's a little underdeveloped, but overall nicely done.

Around the 1:50 mark is my favorite part, the way the music slows down for those sliced in noises.