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Uploaded
Jun 22, 2015 | 10:50 AM EDT
File Info
Song
5.6 MB
4 min 7 sec
Score
4.92 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.92 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,060 Plays | 12 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool
Tags:
alien
weird
trap
slow

Author Comments

let your friends hear this I need constructive criticism
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B-RadGfromOVB-RadGfromOV

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Okay constructive crit:

Your vocals are very quiet in the mix, don't be afraid to make them more prominent so that we can hear what you are saying more clearly.

You have two vocal tracks going on at the same time, one is presumably there to backup the main vocal, but they are not synced. I think this can be remedied by just practicing your flow more, and getting it dialed down to a really precise placement of words. This way you will also sound more confident and can make your words punch more, if you know what I mean. They hit way harder when they have a well defined flow and more force.

Hook: Doesn't seem to be on beat. Not a fan of autotune either, but that's just me.

You seem like you could have something here, beat is nice, and you seem to have a good idea of the feeling and theme of your song. just needs to be more dialed in and clear.


r4godofsun responds:

Thank you so much for your very insightful review! I will take this into deep consideration in my next track. Comments and especially comment like this give me much motivation, I cannot thank you enough.
Best regards, Amon