I feel like you should ramp up your vocals just a bit, maybe use a pre-amp or just increase the db of the vocal track in general, your voice blends too much into the music.
Other than that, you can tell when you stress your voice. Keep on with the practicing and you'll be awesome. Overall good job :)
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