Unfortunately I dont know anything about music theory and all that jazz :P hopefully my critique doesn't come too out of place.
Not too shabby. I know its hip-hop and all but I personally wasn't too fond of the vocals. Sometimes I felt like it went too quiet when the beat kicked in. Instrumentals could have more oomph, say, a greater build up of the melody, it feels a bit generic without some sort of epiphany near the end.
Author Comments
More to come.
SednovaNova responds:
well it's along the lines of one of those tracks however, thanks for your input greatly appreciated!
is this supposed to be humorous
SednovaNova responds:
not helpful
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- Hip Hop - Modern
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- 4.4 MB
- 3 min 51 sec
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