This is a fun listen. My one critical idea is your bass line. At :20 you have a nice rolling kick line which is good. However, shortly after your bass line drops and it overwhelms your kick. Granted, it's there, but is very subdued. This seemingly applies to lyrical sections, as the balance of your mix seems better during the instrumental bits. This may entirely be just me. I'll have to listen to this again later. Thanks for sharing.