This is one of your longer tracks and while it sounds great.
It can use a bit more variety in certain places.
Some vocals might be an interesting addition to include in other future songs.
This track can actually be a bit shorter to be honest.
Work on eliminating certain bits of filler in your song.
Think of as getting your point across with less words.
Sometimes a lot can be said in short sentences.
This track sounds great but more variety is needed to accommodate such a length of time.
I look forward to your new works as always.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.