This is a really complex and beautiful piece.

This is one of your longer tracks and while it sounds great.

It can use a bit more variety in certain places.

Some vocals might be an interesting addition to include in other future songs.

This track can actually be a bit shorter to be honest.

Work on eliminating certain bits of filler in your song.

Think of as getting your point across with less words.

Sometimes a lot can be said in short sentences.

This track sounds great but more variety is needed to accommodate such a length of time.

I look forward to your new works as always.

-Mightydein