Nice work here
So you have some nice effort here the sound quality is notbad but could be better, and there are the little things that really jump out at me. So here is some nice work and I like thats this is kind of long not so short and you really put out your voice there wich is pretty good so nice job all around. So with all that mentioned above I will say to end this out that I was pretty impressed with this and do hope you make more stuff like this one as it was pretty well presented.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some other mixes and sounds and different variations of the voices.