I don't like how this song stars off. The composition is weird for me. I can't really grasp what I should be listing to. I know I hear the song, but the song seems random. BUT, I do know you have a pattern going because I section twice in this song.
If I had to pick my favorite part in this song, It would have to be the bass.
In short, I think your composition should be improved on. I'm not trying to be mean in anyway! In any case, you don't need to take my advice. If your happy with this, good. If not, know that you can, and will improve.