I love this track. so good.
Reviewing my older tracks, eh?
== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==
I was really liking this, but the little flute(?) melody at 1:10 really jarred me out of my appreciation - it seems out of tune, and worse, it doesn't gel with the vibe of the song at all! The rest of the song is great, though. I kinda wish there was someone rapping over the beat, but hey. The atmosphere and the background effects are very well done - it feels very authentic. Score: 8
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 3+/4
* Arrangement: 3/4
* Mixing: 3/4
repetition is key.
I like the flute that starts at about 1:06. This song is a little too repetitive for my taste (or at least my taste in this kind of music...) This isn't my area of expertise, but I just think it's a little too repetitive for me, and my opinion may seem crazy or it may not. Good luck in the NGAUC.
Hip Hop is built around repetition, so I get where you're coming from.
Good luck to you as well.
oh shit! old school to the bone, love this, ah the nostalgia feels ;__; <3 smoothest.
best of luck in the "N G A U C" !!
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