Listened to it, 'till the end in fact, and I really appreciated it, it wasn't perfect, let me say you that first, I think there's a need in training in term of mastering, the dark ambient phase needed to have some really low pitch, to add that kind of vibrance of "sheer", also, the chords and harmonics you brought with the metal part, was really progressive, but it's your style, and, even though it's not perfect, it's still good.
But here where I shall say something really good : That was pretty awesome, all the way, that feel of being insecure, everywhere, and having some kind of speech about the character, every sound was well brought and really gave a sensation of fear, I am personally : A great fan of Dark Ambient ( as I compose some) and really, this was good, this was an intresting feel, it was an intresting experience.
Great work on that one.
Thanks for the review, I was very worried that the length of this piece would put people off, so I appreciate you taking the time to sit through the whole thing (fifteen minutes is quite a trek for a single song)
Also thankyou for raising your points about the mixdown, I'll be sure to take it into account when i give it a second do-over. some sub-bass for the ambient parts and hopefully fatten the guitars up a little bit, they sound a little anticlimactic to me, I was just too excited to get it uploaded.
Thanks for taking the time to listen to and review my work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.