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Reflective Dungeon Theme

Author Comments

This is a song that I composed for a Tune Contest. The theme was to compose a piece for a reflective dungeon that took place underwater/within oneself... a journey to find something within oneself. This is the result.

I hope you enjoy it!


This is pretty cool! The mixing is a little off - sometimes the lead gets buried - but dang, you have a pretty good grasp on theory (or a great ear for good sounding chords :-). The orchestral sound choice, too, is well done - nice use of different string articulations, percussion, bells... all of that tasty stuff. The ending 30 seconds are great. 8

Mini-scores (Note: See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)

* Composition: 3+/4
* Mixing: 2/4
* Arrangement: 3/4

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LloydeSorrow responds:

I'm very glad you enjoyed it and thank you very much for the detailed review! It's very helpful. I've looked at how you derive the scores and I've also looked at the guides you have on how to improve and I find them really helpful! You're awesome! Thank you again!

Amazing composition sir, the progression of the track kept me interested the whole way through. I definitely think you captured "a journey to find something within"

People find this review helpful!
LloydeSorrow responds:

Thank you very much, kind sir! I am glad that you enjoyed it!

A journey to find one's own self/something within: captured perfectly!

I love the flow of this song. You nailed it perfectly, start slow and soft, rise, fall, hit heavy at the climax, and wrap it all up with a great resolution (albeit a bit of a sudden one). I feel that this captures the "inner self search" more than an underwater theme, but it does it quite expertly.

I imagine someone walking through a forest path just while thinking about a really heavy issue. This would be pretty fitting for their contemplating journey. Great work!

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LloydeSorrow responds:

I'm glad you love the song! I'm glad that you feel it captures "inner self search" expertly!

Thank you for the great review! :)

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Credits & Info


4.10 / 5.00

May 22, 2015
1:34 AM EDT
File Info
5 MB
2 min 11 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.