Nice! Great melody you have there at the start, but try to transition it in and maybe add a bass with a bit of hats to fill in the empty spaces ;) The part at 1:00 is awesome, you could try to make it explode more. Love the melody at 2:00, the downsweep might be a bit too loud though :) Overall this track is really good! Might want to work a bit on the mixing a bit, but the melodies are amazing ^^

Might be The Best you've made, but not the best you can do. The main sound you use for the first 30 seconds does get a bit repetitive, but mostly, the attack is a bit too high on it; it starts off too loud each time. I recommend fixing its mixing, too. I think the section around 1:15 is pretty nice, but the buzziness at 1:30ish overpower it. Also at 2:00 that was way too loud, it's okay, just add a buildup first. It also gets a lot louder after that part. Fix those things and it's all good. :)

Great!