I like the emotion in the beginning. Around :20, I think the piano and synth pads start distorting each other a bit. You might have to do some more careful equalizing there. I think it progresses really slowly, but I enjoyed the build-up into 1:01. It's well-structured and smooth-flowing, though. It might've needed a bit more dynamic contrast, but I admire your sense of harmony and progression. The ending is also pretty conclusive. I think you could've done a bit more with this piece. It's not the most unique - I'm seeing a lot of upbeat techno and house songs as I judge this competition. It also might need a bit more melodic development, and it's pretty repetitive too. Still, I like the mood and synths. If you had taken some more risks with this track (as well as cleaned up the mixing a little), this could be a really solid piece. Keep working at it, Polrock. ;)

6.5/10

Ow, that piano. My ears started to hurt. Before attempting to make a track that has piano in it, learn how to edit note velocity. Also, the mixing is average. The song has some potential, though. The melody and the chord progression are quite nice.

Respact!!!!!!!!!!