At first I didn't like the weird main synth, but after the third listening I said to myself "well damn it's actually pretty cool" lol ^^ Probably make it a bit more powerful!
Love the piano at 1:30, nice change and keeps the song interesting.
I honestly don't like the delayed/panned synth after that, could have used different automations or you could have left it out entirely. It is used in the start if my ears don't betray me, but in this part it just doesn't sound good to me.
There could have been a better ending to the track! No fade out, no build up, no fx, etc.
At some point, I was expecting a jumping bassline (like at 2:40, where the kick is missing).
All in all I enjoyed it. A bit weird if you ask me, but that doesn't make it bad :)
I'll be looking up some of your stuff to give you some valid feedback as well. I agree with a lot of what you've said, some stuff that would definitely improve the sound, such as a stronger conclusion and better management of the melodies.
Thanks for taking the time to write a review for me :)
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