I thought the distorted mid-range guitar synths were a little too harsh-sounding, at least for my tastes. The progression was interesting, although I think you needed some more harmonies and instrumentation changes throughout. The same bass riff is playing for the entire first half of the piece, and by about 1:45 I'm really thirsty for variety. That would've been a good time to add a breakdown and capitalize on opportunities for some dynamic contrast. The mixing also could've been stronger IMO. I understand it's probably difficult to master distorted guitar synths, but the distortions are pretty obvious at around :53 especially. Overall, it has a unique sound design and progression, but it could use some more structuring, variety, and harmonizing. It has potential, though. Keep at it, man! ;)