Really fresh and new sounding house track, I haven't heard anything like this before :)
I love the sounds you have used in it.
Intro isn't really getting me into the as it feels more like a break.
I love the main melody.
Missing bass though, especially if you have a "small" melody you wanna have a decent amount of bass around it and as clean as posible sounds.
at 2:40 or so we get some chords, you chould have started with that ;)
Missing some white noises going down in the main melody part or somebody saying ahhh.
outro feelt pretty sudden.
defenitly original and really fresh :)
Thanks for the detailed feedback!