I thought it was okay. The chord progression you have here is pretty good and the content sounds original, but the instruments sound bad to me. This might just be because you lack the funds to have higher quality sounding instruments. Which is fine for now, but I think if you want to really get some listeners you need better stuff. Check out East West they have somewhat cheap quality stuff.

Wow.. Just wow. This is seriously some amazing work. While it is amazing as a whole, what realyy stood out to me was that last note hit. That touched my heart. I cant explain it in words, but you music definitely has the power to move people.
Keep up the great work.
And if you have a chance to review one of my works in progress that would help a lot.
Thanks
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/623311

first 10 seconds: alright im getting instant final fantasy flashbacks, in love with this.
35 Sec: *rising* HERE WE GO!!!
36 Sec: Wow! i love that percussion, flawless beat placement, magical.
listened this through 5 times now, i just cant find any flaws, this is magical for a lack of a better word, stunning, wish the climax part was longer(wish the entire song was longer)
was Nobuo Uematsu your inspiration? just curious,

this gets me all emotional hah, this should seriously be in a Final Fantasy game.
- Pandasticality