I have a feeling you need stronger kicks, I liked this more, but the vocoded sample was too harsh/toowet/too loud, couldn't even understand it.

The industrial electrical synthy sounds were pretty groovy.

This is so energetic and cool. I love those wild, intense lead synths.

My only suggestion to improve on is to lower the volume on the voice some. It's a bit too loud. :)

Hey man, I suggest using an imager on the percussion. Right now they are hiding in the mix and the imager will help bring it out more and make your mix more clear.
The arp does get pretty boring after a while, do something about that. Maybe make it a less emphasized section of your track.
Like what Lantaren says, the track loops nicely. Didn't even notice I was listening to it for a 4th time :P.
What did you use to make it?
Greetings -

I like this. I really like the synth you used for the melody i noticed that it slides from time to time and that variation make the song a lot more interesting. I agree with the previous review that the percussion and drums could use a little boost and that would make things pop. Are you using any mastering vst's? That would help with the mix. Other than that, solid production i could definitely get down to this. If you could review my track and help me out a bit, I'd really appreciate it :)
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/623311
Thanks

i like the song
at first glance i thought the title was; Erectile assassin