Overall the piece is pretty decent, but I really think you need to add more variety to it. It sorta got boring for me after a while. Some ways you can achieve variety is adding more chord changes or adding a new rhythm. Like when you transitioned to your second section that was nice, but when you went back to the first section at around 2:45 I thought you were going to take it too a new place, but you ended up just repeating. I dunno, I don't usually listen to the "world" genre. So take my criticism with a grain of salt.

That's really climatic, I really like it, keep up the good work!