Dude (or girl I am not sexist) YOU HAVE POTENTIAL! The only thing I want to criticize constructively is that the bass drop (I assume it's the drop) is the same as the main loop except there's more bass which is good and the wobble(I think it's called) is louder! But maybe the main melody before the drop could use different instruments or plugins etc, to make the drops stand out more. I am recommending you for the audio portal because you are awesome, definitely better than me at the moment even though this track is a slightly different genre than what I usually compose and produce. Good luck in the future!
-Bradley Spectrum: a newly starting EDM artist