hey,
I'm trying to help you here as much as I can so don't take the things I said as an insult :)
I think this track might be really good for geometry dash, it has a really nice flow. I love it that it just starts a bit slow then it's going fast, then it slows down again and then it goes fast again.
The thing I think you might want to work on a bit are the drum sounds and the mixing of the track. also miss the bass abit.
I miss hihat's, and a good snare. the kick you use is a more rock kick then a video game one.