A lot of good ideas in this. Really liked the structure and general concept of the song. There are a couple of things I need to nitpick on though.

First of all the kick. The kick makes or break a song, so you have to make sure that you put a lot of thought into choosing what kind of kick you want in your song. I'm not sure if you can use kick samples in the demo version of fl, but you'll come a long way by switching the kick with a better sounding one. Once you get your hands on the full version you might even want to design your own kicks :).

I also wished that this song had built itself up throughout the track. As it is know, it sounds kinda flat and plain. Try adding some mare melody layers and maybe some more percussion as well :).

Again, there's a lot of good ideas in this, but it seems like the demo version is limiting you from making this into something truly amazing. Just keep it up, and when you one day get Fl I'm sure you'll be able to absolutely blow my mind with this track :).

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I like it! Can imagine a happy boating sasquatch to it ;) You use some quite cool synth sounds here and I love the quirky melody starting at 30 secs and also the wave noises. Everything is mixed well imho and the master sounds very clear. I get this is work in progress so I guess it will get longer at some point. At the moment it lacks a bit of bass and although it is still quite short there could be a bit more variation in this part. Maybe also the beat could use a bit more build up and some more instruments than just snare and bass drum, but since it´s just the start of the track... Keep it up! I will be happy to hear the finished track!