Not bad man; really liking that melody in the beginning.
One thing you need to watch out for is mixing; making sure everything flows nicely and can be heard. Once 0:26 hit it got a little confusing and kinda just went all over the place. It's mostly due to that reverb you put in there; the delay was a little too long and everything seemed to collide with each other.
But near the end it was really nice; it's got a lot of potential, you've just gotta work with it a bit and get to feel it a little better. Keep it up!