It's been a while since my last comment on one of your songs and also since I heard a song from you... So I had to go back to your older works and compare them with the newer ones. And I can say that you improved. More clearer mixing, better kicks, some more variety and different atmospheres. Your other song "Chid's play" surprised me in a way because it was so different from the others which I think is very good. Try to find your own style of music and continue to experiment.
With this song you leveled up I think because it is different, more smooth and more fluid than the other songs. Keep it up you're on a good way!
What I STILL think you should do now is to make longer tracks. OK, this one is a loop and is supposed to be short... but... I know it's really hard to make a track long (Even I have this problem right now) and not making him too repetitive is also an art. In one minute you can only make one part of the story that will be your song. Personally I am more satisfied with my tracks which have more parts than my shorter ones but do what you want.
Shorter review as the last one... full of "I think" but I hope It'll be useful in some way... I didn't go through all the instruments and the structure and so on because I think this too much of personal taste (I like them by the way..)
This time it's 4 stars because like I said "you leveled up". :)
So... what else to say than:
Never stop creating
Thanks man! And i really WANT to make my tracks longer, but the problem is that i'm using the demo version of FL (Which doesn't allow reloading songs to work on another day) and i really don't feel like paying so much money when music making isn't going to be like a career to me. It's more of a hobby, but i like it alot!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.