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Just something I made for my w.i.p. album, Equinox. It was a little inspired by Rob Scallion and Meshuggah.
Hope you enjoy.

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Thought I'd drop my quick thoughts while going through all the entries for the contest. Used to be a huge metal head so I really enjoyed the nice polyrhythm and suspended chords you got going through this, thought you captured that feel really well. However... jesus christ man your clipping is waaaaay over the top. All your guitar riffs are peaking and fuzzing especially when they layer together... you gotta bring the dB level down man, I had to lower my volume substantially compared to my usual listening level. Hope this helps - looking forward to seeing you in the future hopefully. Cheers.

RokaiYotama responds:

Thank you, I really appreciate the tips. I was trying out a lower tuning and I was just trying to figure out a way to eq it better with the low end stuff I do have. But I'll try and do what I can :)

Pretty nice. As a drummer, I'd say, it should have more tom fills, since death metal fancies that. And the 32nd note bass rolls sounded a little out of sync with the rest, 16ths were great. And maybe tone the cymbals down at 0:45 just a tiny bit. Sickest part was 1:50-2:20 and the end btw. Brutal as hell, keep it up.

RokaiYotama responds:

If you're talking about the ones at :49 and :58, they are triplets that I wanted to be off timed with everything else. But I see you what you mean about the cymbals. But thanks man, I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and to comment. I have a lot more coming, tell your friends :D lol

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Apr 12, 2015
4:33 PM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
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8.7 MB
3 min 49 sec

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