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my first song , wow , it was a bit difficult since there were so many options available , and it was difficult to devise a song , originally wanted to do rock, but it was very confusing to use the piano roll in electric guitars and they were not given a tone then decided to take the dark piano and experience , in the end finished with this, but I would like to receive feedback .

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3p0ch

2015-04-25 20:08:44

I really like the ambient background effects. At 0:45 the lead keyboard switches from its intro to playing a melody of all whole notes; I definitely prefer the former to the latter. The melody is nice for a few measures, but it soon seems like there ought to me more complexity to it. Going back to an approach like in the intro seems appropriate at that point. If the keyboard is really meant to play more of a background role than a lead at that point, maybe back off its volume or increase the volume of the other instruments to let them shine through more.