0:00 This feels like an old school club. I think I get what you mean when you modified the automation. Sorry I haven't heard the original song but the automation per bar is pretty cool.
0:28 I can see this being the dance music for that Trinity scene in the Matrix where she tells him the life he's been living is a lie or something.
0:45 It's like some super futuristic dance techno music where everyone is wearing black leather and typing into their hologram personal devices and stuff.
1:05 It's pretty lowkey, and that's what I like about it. The synth isn't all in your face. It knows what it wants to be.
1:20 This is like the scene in the movie where everyone's dancing and trying to yell over the music but then there's some misunderstanding or something.
1:38 Sorry I keep talking about movies but it reminds me of the scene in The Social Network where Mark Zuckerberg is talking to the founder of Napster and is just yelling over the cacophony "this is our time" and there's gogo dancers dancing downstairs and all sorts of unsavoury characters around sharing their sweat.
2:20 OK I'm gonna skip to later, I hope you don't mind.
3:07 skip again
4:01 Ok this is back to a real original beat. Cool. It's very nice. I like the automation.
4:24 This has a real awesome vibe to it. Singular note, but just pounding along. Props.
4:40 And it's gonna end. Cool. I wonder how it ends.
4:53 On a delay. Nice way to end actually.

So. This isn't my typical genre but I have to say I actually really liked it. It reminded me of many great movie scenes, as you can tell by my annotation. The repetition doesn't become *repetitious*, it keeps it moving along at a brisk rate whilst maintaining momentum. I mean, it's not my type of song, but what it aims to achieve it does with success. So... good job :) 4/5 from me.