It's outside of my usual genre of writing. Although criticism is only effective when constructive. How you feel about this (or anything else) is your choice, and I'm not offended by downvotes or whatnot, but at least offer reasons as to why. That's how people grow/evolve. I don't mean to come of as a wank, but honestly, this comment served absolutely 0 purpose.

Thanks man. Now I'll just go find someone to put it in a video game haha