I took some criticism into account and made this piece a little more focused on the overall sound quality. Made this in FL 11 (Demo Version). Being the FL demo, I am forced to finish these songs in one sitting. That being said, I feel I have achieved a better overall sound. I'd definitely appreciate some feedback on what you guys think.

~Marching for days, your soles ache and your heels blister. You've traveled across sand and sea to reach your destination. As the mountains loom over the horizon, you feel the lingering anxiety of the impending struggles you are to face. Your confidence is dwindling, but you know you must face the tyrant. His forces are strong at the base of the mountains, and this is where you will make your final strike. Death is expected, and your life will serve its purpose regardless of victory. Hold your head up high, and give everything you have. It will be what defines you. It is your legacy. Bring down the tyrant. Triumph over all...