Thoughts while listening: Nice initial sound! Pretty epic beat, nice flow. Not sure the chorus on the vocal works well. Be careful on the content on NG...not like you can't be offensive here, but you can expect some people to get offended. But hey, that's rap for you. I've offended plenty in my time. Not really much new in terms of subject matter here...There's something to be said for originality.
Thoughts after listening:
Well, you're good enough to be scouted, for sure. I agree that the issue is one of putting a few more songs out there, as well as being active on the site. I'd recommend joining the "Review for Review thread in the Audio Forum, to draw some attention to your music.
-We've heard the money and hos thing ad nauseum. You've got the flow, we get it. Tell me something I haven't heard.
-The chorus on the lead vocal makes it hard to hear the words. It can be used for backup vocals, sung pieces, etc. Would recommend it for the lead rap.
Some Good Things;
-Super-refreshing to hear a decent rapper on the site. I'm getting sick of listening to back-tracks, and it's great to hear the lead being taken.
-Perfect back beat. You know your mixing.
Overall, solid hip-hop. Props!