Very nice track! The vibrato on the melody synth feels a little overdone though. Also there's a bit too much reverb on the synths. Kinda lacks a bass but as I said, great track!
Thank you, and cheers for the feedback. This track feels almost demoish now that I've had time to listen to it. I've been feeling adding in rumbling bass line and something else, but for now I can't quite figure what. I'll work on it closer towards the end of the Jam when I get time.
Everything in this song communicates a hopeless struggle to hold yourself together in the face of adversity and every element of this song goes towards conveying this more effectively. I like it. :)
I'm really pleased you like it, thanks for the kind words. It's the kind of vibe i'm looking to go with so i'm glad you picked up on it.