=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===
If there's one thing that you're doing well, I'd definitely say that it's arrangement. I see that you've definitely picked up a sense for when to transition to and away from ideas, and the song actually comes off as cohesive, which is a good sign because all your ideas are fitting together. However, this song is lacking in the other two areas, most notably composition. The melodies aren't particularly catchy or interesting, and they actually feel a bit random. I really want more to them! Also, the mixing seems a little squashed together, and some elements don't really fit in the tune (notice what happens to everything else when the crash cymbal hits, for example). Still, not bad - keep going!
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Mixing: 2/4
Arrangement: 3/4
Composition: 1+/4
Overall (this is not an average): 5/10