Drum kick leads nowhere. Voice plugins are unnecessary and are pretty much like a stock image.
leads into a werid arp with no cohesion, no rhythm which leads into another looped voice from whatever program your using which again leads into another no rhythm arp ending with another unnecessary voice loop.
Your song lacks structure, your first was better yet suffers from these same problems. Really I don't know how to tell you to improve. I guess just keep working, do your best and you will produce something great. Then upload that. I'm gonna follow you to watch for progress. Best of luck, and find something you enjoy to sample.
Thanks for your comment. You helped me a lot. I'm keep working and I think one time I'll make great song.