Beautiful! Wow, i'm impressed!
But one thing very important your voice is Swallowed up in the music, make in in the "front".
use a compresor to make it. and maybe add some reverb / dealy another effects on the voice!
Thanks mate, I appreciate the feedback. Although I did add reverb to the vocals I think at points it might've been a little too much which could be why the lyrics seem to be drowned out by the music lol live and learn as they say. =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.