First off, I assume this is the original song, not the remastered one.
It's a good song with a good, somewhat dynamic melody and reasonable background. However, there wasn't much of a beat to it, so that kinda ruined it for me a little. I also kept waiting for a bass drop, as it seemed like the kind of song that would have one, but it never came.
I definitely think you should remake this. I don't know your music yet, but I'd enjoy hearing this improved!
Thanks for the response! i'll definitely think about that. beats were definitely something i was lacking in when I wrote this. It could definitely go in a different direction