the melody in the beginning was pretty good aside from the sequence of 2 notes playing from the piano, it didnt fit that well in my opinion
the transition was fucking great though and your sound design was quite amazing but just after the transition it sounds like a montage of sounds thrown together until the transition back into the piano sequence
instead of having your last transition with the claps and such, it should have been replaced for your second transition so instead of the montage of sounds it would be the transition into the last transition
my explanation was shit with this :P
anyway this song sounds pretty damn cool to be used in a video game and your sound design was quite impressive just your first transition could be a bit better, hell since we have the same DAW you should let me take a look at it so i can show you what i mean lol
well this song is sure to be amazing when its done because as for what ive heard this is very fucking impressive even for a demo
i cant wait to hear the final version keep it up! ^_^