1:00-1:30 was a really good transition into the full sound. I would be wary of opening up too slowly in my own opinion. The song is very good, and very clean. Overall, I can't point out anything in particular that you did poorly. I say keep it up!
Yeah I hate the intro with a passion lol. I do really like the main parts, but the intro kills it, and ever since I put this out , I've been planning to do a version with a better intro. I'm working on it now actually
The song is excellent on a technical standpoint. No issues with any of the instruments, and everything flows nicely.
I do feel however, that it builds up to a false climax. I was hoping for a little more bang near the end.
Thanks for the feedback! I was trying to make a part with more bang, but I couldn't get it down, so I ended up going with the somewhat calmer part after the break
Once I got a minute in, I was Really diggin it! The intro had a couple notes that just stood out to much and I couldn't help but focus on them, but from a minute on I really loved the song. Good Work!
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I think the intro kinda sucks in general lol
the long beginning rise is quite repeative but it doesnt feel dull at all, works really well, once the piano hops on the beat with the other melody its so nice, the kick feel abit weak, not feeling that but i still feel like dancing at a beach with my friends, alot of variety, different sequences, thats awesome, i suppose i really could say this is mesmerizing, good job man, keep it up.
Are you by chance Madeon disguising as a Newgrounds user?
I wish I was that good lol, thanks!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.