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Trapped here in my mind, these walls seems so high. I need someone to save me.

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I like the cute mood at the beginning. The chord progression is a little cliche, and I think you went a little overboard on the reverb on a couple of the synths here. The melodic content in the piano is enjoyable, and you have a good sense of harmony. The drums come through the mix pretty clearly, but I think the excessive reverb detracts from the distinctness of the synths. The piece has a cool atmosphere and mood, although the piece gets pretty repetitive towards the end. The fade-out ending struck me as a bit lazy, and I think you could do more to offer some shape and variety in the piece (a breakdown or bridge, some more dynamic contrast and phrasing, etc.). Overall, it’s pretty good. A little more effort into the composition, and this would be a really solid piece. Keep at it, Shabbyjazz. :)

7.25/10

Shabbyjazz responds:

Much appreciated, a very thorough and precise review. I will take this into consideration :)

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Shabbyjazz
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Mar 12, 2015
6:14 AM EDT
Genre
New Wave
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4.1 MB
3 min 34 sec
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