Hmm...

Would have to agree with Nyx on the above points. Tons of distortion, very little stereoscopic separation, and the samples aren't the greatest.

The clipping issue is due to the extreme amount of distortion used. The only way to solve that is to not distort everything. Remove any compressors or dynamic processing effects on certain instruments. Your primary obsessions should be improving your dynamic quality and clarity. That means buckling down and learning equalization. Once you got that, you won't need distortion and soon you'll realize that it's just an effect to give a sound a specific timbre.

Composition was actually interesting though, despite the odd time signature. It works, in a sense.

Keep on practicing. Look up tutorials and read that manual. It's your best friend.

-J.P.

The timing is not a problem here, in fact i though the weird time signature was intentional. The problem itself is the rest. The track clips (Major problem), the instruments and samples used are pretty cheap, the composition itselfs feels basic and forced, and overall, it isn't pleasant to hear.

But everyone starts from somewhere, keep practicing, it make take some time but everybody eventually learns, keep it up man.