I love the melody for this, and the transitions to a softer tone around 2:05 was awesome. This is nearing perfection, but it feels... lacking? At least a bit. To me, I think a calm 8 bit drum track in the background would be great with this. Maybe adding bandpass to it so that it's not overwhelming over the rest of the entirety of the song. Transitioning the drums would be awesome along with the transitions of the melody in points where it's more soft in some parts and heavier in others. It is your project, and you did what you believed was best, and for that, I like it.