Thoughts while listening:
Some messed-up FX. Love me some theramin, fer sure. OK...waiting for all this build-up to pay-off...not confident at the moment. Halfway through. Aaaaaand building again...2:15...This isn't going anywhere, is it? Good rumble at 2:40...

Thoughts after listening:

Some improvements;
-I agree with Crimsonskies. There's no structure. It's like a porno with no money shot. True, it's interesting, but I feel like there was no reward at the end of all that.
-You know, I can even get on board with all the experimental stuff. I would probably have loved this if it had resolved into just 10 seconds of dubstep or something with a beat.

Some Good Things;
-One of the more interesting soundscapes, with lots of neat stuff to listen to and single out for attention.
-And it was your first jam with the new equipment, which is saying something, considering the diversity of the soundscape. I expect amazing things in the future!

Overall, you have achieved the goal of 'experimental.' I don't know what to make of the results of the experiment, but I'm kinda wondering what the takeaway is for you. What did you learn here? This song leaves far more questions, for me, than answers.

3.5/5 R4R

-Ceevro

Really enjoyed what you did with the synths and the bassline literally rumbled my headphones. I have never felt anything like it and the melody line when the song got closer into it was freaking awesome. Loved the filter effects and the reverb! The only complaint I have is their is literally no structure to the song and it was more of an experiment than anything,but nevertheless it was a really awesome listen.