The intro drags a bit but it's not too bad. This is a very calming song. I really enjoyed the bit that started at 1:10, the sounds all mesh together really well.The vocals are a little weird, I don't like the layering. Overall this is a very good piece.
Author Comments
My attempt at being American Football or something. Really wish I knew a drummer that plays this style. And a bass player. And a singer. And another guitar player.
Words:
You are the sunset smile thundering out of a careless moment.
You are the tightly closed fingers holding in a breath.
If you would stay here with me, one more minute, I would steal the world.
MyApologies responds:
I know what you mean about the intro/beginning part. In my head I hear drums and other things but I'm only a guitar player and I have no idea how to program drums.
I tried something different with the vocals. It has an odd reverb on them. I was aiming for something dreamy/other worldy.
Thanks for the review! Check some of my other jams out!
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