As Kwing said, I get a very Nujabes feel from this, albeit without the Low Pass Filter Jun usually used.

That sample sounds like it's a low quality MP3.

Is that due to the filter that's being applied?

With the drums, it fits, but it would have been better if you'd have continued with the b section in the second half.

Perhaps some scratches on some vocals for a hook, then go back with a bit of differentiation in the beat during the second verse.

As it stands, this isn't horrible; It just needs to be fleshed out some more. :)

4/5 8/10

This has a very Nujabes feel to it. As a whole it feels very complete and relaxing. Not sure how it could be made better, seems great the way it is.

Sounds great man, would like to hear it with the percussion a little lower, maybe another set of drums? but it is awesome as it is