An interesting tune indeed.
The beginning was a bit sharp. I might suggest dampening the notes just a tiny bit. The main melody itself is really nice, and could be enhanced with a warm synth pad in the background. But, all in all, I like this little piece.
Keep it up,
Hm. It's a nice little melody, but it's kinda repetitive. It should probably just be a loop, not a song. But it is really nice to listen to. Not bad!
Thanks! I didn't think about making it into a loop, but that's not a bad idea.