This is beyond awful. 0 stars.
Try using not just 1 instrument, but multiple instruments. Like a electronic, or a dubstep :)
This song isn't nearly as bad as the score makes it out to be.
However, it wasn't anything incredible either. The melody feels like it isn't able to say what it wants to. I would highly suggest checking out the works of Boux to see how a song like this can be done spectacularly well.
Keep playing, mate, and don't mind the hate.
got lots of traffic from a self promotion thread. (lazy mods)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.