I agree with MrBellington its a great start, it just needs a little more variation and work.

Hi there.

The staccato violin figures and friendly progression are generally agreeable, but it could definitely do with some more variety in instrumentation, rhythm and dynamics. The piece is a little repetitive. Structurally there's nothing wrong with it, but the sound feels like it could've been 'filled out' more, perhaps with some woodwinds, or brass, to truly evoke the majesty of a sunset. The track is at the same volume throughout, which undermines the effectiveness of the lush, 'heavier' parts. At 2:38 there's some crackling in the audio, and the mixing in general could've been stronger. That said, it's not a bad effort by any means.