Thoughs: The intro is too long, you should use the first 5 seconds and then go straight for the piano. I am also not fond of the upbeat drums that go in, i don't find them fitting for an RPG setting. It is also extremely repetitiive, some kind of variation would help this a lot. The idea is good, melody is catchy, it has potential but it would need some work, specially about how is so repetitive.