This could well be in an Invader Zim episode, such an awesome show. Feel like the drums could be brought out a little more but damn son, lots of variation in the drum pattern which is great, It's easy to get lazy with drums so props for putting the time in to get them sounding slick!
this one sounds very spooky, I can imagine putting this in like a horror action game from the 90s or something.
it Is kind of sad
Nice ambient pads you got going on there. When the drums come in, it totally shifts...not sure how well the breakbeats go with those pads. Works much better at the two minute mark, maybe the snare is just too heavy. If you switched parts 0:30-1:45 with 1:45-end it might actually flow better...haha.
Overall, it is a very haunting melody and some excellent percussion elements. You were bold for putting such varying styles together, but it just doesn't quite mold together to the point where it has a great replay value. Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.