Nice throwback to those old games soundtracks! Sounds kinda like jet set radio :) I really like this piece and I can definitely tell you put blood sweat and tears into this, I'd say it lacks a bit of a drone in the background, kinda like a bass but even deeper and also a section for a clean solo that really rises about the rest, theres a flute melody line, but not really any climax. I would just be a bit conscious towards the transition in the first parts. From a hard street style drum beat that suddenly evolves into this jazzy mood, it needs to be like evolution, slowly growing! Give it some wings and help it fly :)
Haha yeah, those drums took me ages to program, but was really worth it! I got my ideas from an artist called Soichi Terada. He composed the soundtrack for Ape Escape 1, and Ape Escape 3, so if you've played those games, you'll notice that there are some similarities, specifically the song for Coral Cave https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lw7jBxbHfJs
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.